September 20, 200421 yr now i dont really play with neone cept doc so this is really a poem for doc. sry arnie and panther [Dial] Doc When I fly, Through the sky. I am not shot down, Until I have been found. When I try to hide, With an m82 at my side. I am always found, By the guy who makes no sound. His M16, that is tottin, With it, he is smokin. When it comes down to the clock, I say GOOD GAME Dial Doc. eh, looks bad now that i wrote it again LOL. comments? -G
September 20, 200421 yr I like it G, it's cool hehe btw. I'm rarely all that silent that burst fireis quite noisy :)You should also have added some of your mad Mp5 out run burst skills passage to it :wink: I can't tell if that one is better or worse that the 1st one since I only saw this one. But as I said I like it 2-thumbs upfor Poet-G :)We need to play king of the log again sometime, allknife and no mercy :twisted: [DIAL]Doc
September 20, 200421 yr Author lol this was a poem bout you silly. not my skills. lol . and yes. we NEED to do king of the log again. gonna be harder this time since its always has alot of people playing still. lol. im glad you like.-G
September 20, 200421 yr Here is a poem of Klink's Skills.000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000The End
September 21, 200421 yr Author Kol_Klink]Here is a poem of Klink's Skills. 0000000000 00000000000 0000000000 0000000000 0000000000 The End LOL thats a great poem man. it even RHYMED!!! -G
September 21, 200421 yr :roll: I suck -ss6 this has been another addition of cow being owned by a forum admin...
September 21, 200421 yr Author :shock: :roll: ok god cow you think you can do better. go. have at it -G
September 21, 200421 yr I agree with You, G - it is bad. The poem has little rythm - only 2 times the verses harmonize with each other.
September 21, 200421 yr Author lol. i guess its the way i say it in my head.i know how i want it versed. not saying you gotta like it. lol least your honest -G
September 21, 200421 yr Iambic pentameter. It's what the best use, like Shakespeare. 8)Remember: strive for iambic pentameter. If you don't know what it is, look it up and learn it before attempting poetry again. You'll see how much better it comes out. (Not saying your current attempts are bad or anything. )
September 21, 200421 yr :roll: I suck -ss6 this has been another addition of cow being owned by a forum admin... lol! pwnt!!! :twisted:
September 21, 200421 yr Haya, the hill all should go up is the hexameter. The rhyming of all the greatest poems. Of course outside ancient greek language its impossible (for none have the same short-long tone system).
September 22, 200421 yr nothing loike self-depricating humor eh klink? Yep, Just thought I'd try my hand at poetry and G keep up the poetry , you can only get better with time.
September 25, 200421 yr Very nice poem, Doc is the fence master with his m16!00101100 (0010 1100) or x2C or 44 for the D caracter,01001011 (0100 1011) or x4B or 75 for the o caracter,00111111 (0011 1111) or x3F or 63 for the c caracter.A poem in binary, hexa, decimal ascii and the alphabetic caracters! 8) I shall try to make best the next time... Egidio.
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