Well, despite nadril posting his amazing work of art (darn you!) im going to show my second work, well, here yah Go

 

http://img288.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pa5pl.jpg Though i doubt this is worthy of your wallpaper, im pretty sure its wall-paper size!

 

Oh, and this is somthing i did a while ago, i dont like it to much but another fourm (Which nadril doesnt ever go to!) realy liked it, so here you go.

 

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/5827/tada6wp.th.jpg

better textures and more smoothing on the first. but the water is good

better textures and more smoothing on the first. but the water is good

More smoothing, got yah. And, i cant figure how to make textures work D; (yes, im a terra-Nub)

 

Edit: **** was n o o b, why is that bad?

actually Wheat.....I like it a lot. Nice work man.

actually Wheat.....I like it a lot. Nice work man.

 

thanks.

Nice job. The second one reminds me of the map Gator made for Battlefield: Vietnam.

the second one is a little bright (water) for me, other than that, they are nice. keep up the good work, the more you do, the better youll get.

the second one is a little bright (water) for me, other than that, they are nice. keep up the good work, the more you do, the better youll get.

 

 

Gosh ppl i can do better then him

Gosh ppl i can do better then him

 

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Now that I actualy feel like typing something up, here's some C&C. don't take this the wrong way, your doing great for only your 3rd or so piece, but there is a lot to improve on.

 

 

 

- The clouds. If you put them on 3d, turn their depth to 1. right now they (or shall I say it) looks extremly unrealistic.

 

- The mountains into the water. Mountains almost never enter the water like that. 95% of the time they enter the water at a small angle, ex. A beach.

 

- the surface. From what I can see, its just brown. Now, granted the atmosphere and terrain doesn't alow you to put much of one in there, but keep that in mind for further pieces.

 

 

Other than that, the sun is unbelivably big. I mean, it's freaking 'huge. Although, I do aplaud you on the small ray's there you have, even though it was probaly unintentional.

 

 

Now that I actualy feel like typing something up, here's some C&C. don't take this the wrong way, your doing great for only your 3rd or so piece, but there is a lot to improve on.

 

- The clouds. If you put them on 3d, turn their depth to 1. right now they (or shall I say it) looks extremly unrealistic.

 

- The mountains into the water. Mountains almost never enter the water like that. 95% of the time they enter the water at a small angle, ex. A beach.

 

- the surface. From what I can see, its just brown. Now, granted the atmosphere and terrain doesn't alow you to put much of one in there, but keep that in mind for further pieces.

 

Other than that, the sun is unbelivably big. I mean, it's freaking 'huge. Although, I do aplaud you on the small ray's there you have, even though it was probaly unintentional.

Well, i meant to get the rays, i was using a tutorial, but i want to make it a little more surronded by rays, and also, i will keep what you said in mind

ah ok then .

 

It seems the ray's you got were from the mountain though, the light shining through it. usualy tutorials do it through the clouds.

 

Or, who knows, may be possible I just can't see it .

ah ok then .

 

It seems the ray's you got were from the mountain though, the light shining through it. usualy tutorials do it through the clouds.

 

Or, who knows, may be possible I just can't see it .

nice