Decided to do a quick wallpaper thing using the Clan tag. Please comment and let me know where improvements can be made or additions you'd like to see.

 

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/207/5/9/The_Armory_by_jman10001.jpg

pretty cool

neato, pretty sweet bepop

Very nice Bebop. I'm not the best at photoshop, but I'll try to give out some criticism. First off the render, very nice choice. The Stalker render was very well blended into the background and the colors didn't conflict very much at all. The background I like. To me it kind of looks like faded, wrinkly paper which isn't a bad thing. I also noticed the splatter brushes, they add a nice touch. As for the text, I really liked the underline, but the text itself I had a few conflicts with. I liked the choice of text and the fading effects, but one thing I didn't like was the few parts where the (=A=) tag was overlaped by some of the text. Those black spots to me kind of took away from the rest of the background, my eyes went straight to there when I saw it.

 

Like I said, I'm not the best photoshoper around. I haven't taken any classes or anything and everything I've learned and know I've taught myself so I'm really in no position to give good criticism. It looks good, but to me, the text kind of docked it just a few points. Good luck on classes though Bebop. Hope I've helped.

Alright, thanks for the feedback thus far. I'm gonna change it around a bit and put up another version and see if its fixed a bit better

Very nice, but I agree with Year Old Taco on the overlapping text; of course, I hate to say anything negative because it's great.

nice thanks.

Good job!

looks awesome

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/207/d/e/Armory_v2_by_jman10001.jpg

 

ok, well here's just a quick fix (sorry for late post though, much eating/movie-watching hath occured between original post and the fix). Feels like its missing something, but that may just be me.

 

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/207/e/9/Armory_v__red_by_jman10001.jpg

 

thats basically the same stuff, but with just a red theme. not really too interested in it cause it was just for fun to see what it would look like.

 

thanks for the feed-back thus far :cool:

I like how you blended the guy into the bg. Good job:D

thank you :cool: i don't think the red version blended as well though...

Mmm, I like the red though..it's my favorite color!

looks good, i like the seperation of the A tag with the rest of the letters

I like it! I like it!

Much better Bebop. I personally don't like the red as much as the black one, but you fixed up the text. It makes it look a whole lot better.

Looks good

oo oo and another. +1 :cool: